THIS IS THE DEAL

You say you love me huh,
then why not prove it..
If you can't,then maybe
you should just move it..
Anyone can say they love,
but I deal with actions..
You don't make no moves,i
gets no satisfaction..
You say you want me,well
here I am,calling ya bluff..
Don't wanna play any games,
way to old for all that stuff..
Wanna make me wait,fine,but
my patience is wearing thin..
Seems like its all ending,before
it even had a chance to begin..
Its like all I get are excuses,its
cause of this or cause of that..
You just aint ready for this,cause
you would've stepped up to bat..
Look I have mad love for you,
but imma have to keep it real..
I'll be out here doing my thang,
that's it,now you know the deal..

Rick~

That’s right you tell it like it is. All talk and no action eeh? Doesn’t sound much like the girl for you. I say you keep searching. But what do I know I’m just a foolish woman.

lol

well Im just seeing where it goes,she's worth the wait..shit I waited for the girl in my poems for over a year while I knew all along the chances were slim to none...but I won't be doing that ever again!! Ricklovin

lol

well Im just seeing where it goes,she's worth the wait..shit I waited for the girl in my poems for over a year while I knew all along the chances were slim to none...but I won't be doing that ever again!! p.s you're not foolish,you're a sweet heart!!!! Ricklovin

hey

you must really love her. but she should quit with the games and dilly dallying.SHOW you she loves you too! do your thing , dont wait around.

weellllll

I do have love for her,but I wouldn't say im in love with her,hasn't gotten to that point yet,and by the looks of it,its not gonna happen lol...so yeah im definately gonna be doin my thang lol...hmmm,say,what are you doing this saturday?lol jk....thanks mona....Ricklovin

hey

what would you like me to be doing this weekend...lol! you make me laugh.cheers!

lol

well I could think of a lot of things to do on saturday..but it might take us all the way til monday lol...Ricklovin

Yo

Bro, you're poems look very similar to mine lol. I think we're in the same situation.

"If you can control your words, you can control the world" - John Melikyan

that's crazy

I just read yours,seems like we know the same girl lol..fuck it,its their loss I figure...Ricklovin

wooow!!!

yet agen you amaze me with your commical and talented writing, you could go sooooo far rick and if you made a book, id would deffo buy it cuz i cant stop reading your stuff.
do you have a website with other poems? id lyk to read more of it, if thats ok
snuggly bug .x.x.

sorry

im sorry no,I don't have any on other sites,I haven't been writing for that long...thank you so much snuggs it really means the world to me that you would say such nice things about my poems and me....thanks for all the love and thanks for reading....Ricklovin

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