THE LOVER

If ever i said that I loved you,
you can trust that it isn't a lie..
If you'd take the time to read,
I'll explain a bit to you why..
Its not that im some sort of
a player,no that's not it at all..
Loving women is my curse,its been
like this ever since I could recall..
Believe me I don't do it for fun,
that's not how I get my kicks..
The opposite sex is like a drug to me,
im like a addict that needs his fix..
They all have something special,
that has set them all apart..
I have honestly loved them all,and
each one has a piece of my heart..
Now,you might think im full of shit,
but im telling you that it isn't true..
Don't be so quick to judge me,unless
if at some point you've been my boo..
Im loving someone now,and loving
her as if I will never love another..
You better keep a watchful eye,cause
the bitch might just be your mother lol..

Rick...

yeah, loving people is an addiction....remember the song, "love the one youre with"....
yes it did make me smile...cuz i cant tell now if you feel this or if you are fantasizing.,...LOL
anyways, its a good one!
nice going
Linda

lol thanks

well to tell you the truth,I am like that,but shhhhhh,don't tell anybody....thanks for reading linda...Ricklovin

Still laughing

So nice to find the twist at the end, especially when a reader is not expecting to find it.

kool

glad you liked it,I didn't intend for the last lines to be like that,but once I got to that point it just poppoed in my head,I was laughing myself lol...once I wrote it down it changed the whole poem,didn't it?anyway,thanks for reading and leaving the comment,I apreciate it.....Ricklovin

LOOL!!

so funi luved it =D

thanks

snuggle bug,lol I like the name..thanks for reading and commenting im really glad you enjoyed it and im glad it made you smile...Ricklovin

This is awesome.

This is awesome. I am totally into your unadulterated honesty. You definitely have talent!

geez thanks so much

that's what's up,thanks for the kind words nell,I really do apreciate it...I hope it don't go straight to my head lol.....Ricklovin

lol!

lol! i love your poems.funny! i dont judge you.lol!

thanks

thank you so much mona..im really glad you like my poems...muah..thanks for the love...Ricklovin

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