Tell me something

Tell me,does he make you
feel like your the one...
Can you count on him when
something has to be done...
Has he stayed up half the
night writing you poetry...
Tell me the truth,will you
love him more than me...
Will he whisper I love you
in your ear,late at night...
Will he call everyday,just
to make sure your alright...
Does he know little things,like
how you love grey goose...
Does he know you hate it,when
your pants fit you a bit loose...
Can he make you laugh the
way i've been known to do...
Does he know,that you call
me when you're feeling blue...
When its time for bed,does he
stay up to play with your hair...
When you've left,does he breath
in the scent you've left in the air...
See,you already know how I feel
and what i am willing to do...
But alas,seems you just feel
im not good enough for you...

relating

I feel you man, nice poems. I really like them

"If you can control your words, you can control the world" - John Melikyan

thanks

thanks alot don....

love it

wow rick this poem bought back some feels no one knew me better than my ex just da same way u know da girl u writing about my ex knew me like that i really love this poem

gracias

thanks lorraine,most of the poems I've written are about her,I hate it but she inspires me to write,can't help it!!!!!

nice!

its terrible when you someone inside out and believe them to be the one, and they just seem so oblivious or not to care. i have beent here. my ex seemed to just know me, then dumped me.lol! im over it though and seeing a great new guy. thanks .-mona-

lol

mona Im absolutely flattered you like my poems..thanks for taking the time to read and comment..Ricklovin

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