OVERDUE
Seems like to her,im only good for
maybe about one or two things..
Doesn't care at all that when I see
her,it always makes my heart sing..
She doesn't give a damn,just as
long as I play my little part..
I feel she takes advantage,clearly
she knows what's in my heart..
I may not be like the typical guy
that she might be looking for..
But that's not a bad thing,because
the way I see it,im so much more..
I occasionaly get a call or text with
some low key and casual remarks..
But everytime I see her name pop up,
I admit it,it ignites that certain spark..
I honestly have to stop,because its never
going down the way that I want it to..
I deserve love just as much as the next
guy,and I think its been wa-a-ay overdue..
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Well Put!
This piece came across really fluently, and I felt it was written from the heart. I could be wrong...I usually am!
Nice write Rick.
thanks squirel
you weren't wrong,I always write what im feeling..so its always from the heart...I definately have alot of love for this girl,just wish I could put it to bed so to speak,cause me loving her is gettin me nowhere....anyway,thanks for readin and for the comment,its greatly apreciated....Ricklovin
Damn Straight
Rick,
We have all been in this same damned dilemma and believe me most of the time she's playing cool because she afraid of her attraction to you. Give it time and the truth will play out.
Pete
I don't know pete
bro,in case you don't know,most of my poems,I'd say about 80% of what I have here on this site are about this girl....I've waited over a year,so I don't think its gonna happen lol...I know she has some feelings but I guess its not enough you know...anyway,thanks for the advice and also for taking the time to read and comment....Ricklovin
This is nice...
This is nice...