A LoVe ReMeMBeReD
Was it it all just a vison,
an unfortunate dream?
Must have been real,
or so it had seemed.
At a glance both her and
I,in such a romantic affair.
The truth shown through,
if you'd continue to stare.
Missed opportunities,
secrets unmentioned.
A love held so true,
defying convention.
Sweet coquetish smile,
and with firey red hair.
Reminders of a time,which
now have become so rare.
This torch I hold firmly,
not to be extinguished.
Memories of lost time,
never shall I relinquish.
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Hey Rick,
This is really a nice write, all though there is a word I may have to break out my dictionary for,lol. But really, this write has good flow to it, I like it. take care-Lee
thanks Lee
I don't know what word it is but ima take a guess. Is it coquetish?
Ricklovin
Yep, that was it...
I am waiting on daylight, I got to put my car back together, a timing belt broke last week this is my day off, so I hope to get it all back together today, but yea you are right, "coquetish", a girl or women who flirts.... hmm... I gonna to read this write again, I gotta run,its almost daylight,later Rick
aww ricklovin'
i still see how much you love her!
It's so bittersweet. I really do feel for you and I can understand!
You have expressed it tenderly in this write.
You have become such a great writer through all this heartbreak!
its amazing what being in love with someone can do, isnt it?
xoxo
Linda
yes Linda
I do love her a lot,always will to some degree I imagine.you know,I tried and tried Linda.I played her game,and didn't get anywhere,then I tried to show her I can be sensitve and sweet,finally I just came clean and told her exactly how I felt and none of it got me anywhere.guess its just not meant to be! Honestly I don't think it would've worked out anyways. Fuck it,ill live! And I agree. I think I've become a much better writer while going thru all this. At least I came away with something more than just a broken heart huh lol. Thanks Linda xoxoxoxoxoxox
Ricklovin
MUAH!
A big kiss to you ricklovin!