LETS TAKE A PEAK

I peak inside
You're fast asleep
The door is ajar
So in I creep
Sheets pulled back
I get in the bed
You let out a sigh
As both legs I spread

Im feeling the heat
I go in for the kiss
Like a trap set and baited
I just can't resist
You were already moist
Now covered in juices
The sweet taste of life
And all it produceses

You give me the look
I know what it means
I take off my shirt
Slip out of my jeans
Heart pumping fast
You're feeling alive
Legs begin to shake
Its like a train ride

Its far from being over
We've only just begun
Ready for round two?
Lots more fun to come
What?you wanna a break?
Don't you go near the door
Please get back in bed
Daddy wants some more

What another train ride!!

Patrick J. Callahan

Something infectious about trains recently, great flow, rhyme, ride, scenery, and affordable fare.

lol

thanks for reading and for the funny comment...glad you enjoyed it...Ricklovin

lol

thanks for reading and for the funny comment...glad you enjoyed it...Ricklovin

Lovin"Rick....or Ricklovin"

No break needed "daddy"...LOL
I love it Rick. Especially the "train ride" inference.
such a sexy "right"..i mean write...great job!
Linda

lol really no break

thanks linda..judging from ya poems i'll be the one needing the break lol..thanks again linda,your comments are always well apreciated....Ricklovin

Fun!!!

Sounds exciting...how do I win free tickets? Sexy and Fun!!!

tickets ehh

you don't need a ticket,i'll give you a season pass,so you can ride whenever you like lol...and I promise you won't be unlucky(insider)lol......Ricklovin

WOW

I feel like a winner already!!! *giggle*

good stuff

Look out for my next one....imma try to top your :p

"If you can control your words, you can control the world" - John Melikyan

ok

that's what's up,i'll be keeping an out out for it....Ricklovin

ok

that's what's up,i'll be keeping an out out for it....and thanks for reading don...Ricklovin

nice

i like this. being woken up from a deep sleep and swept into passion.beautiful!

nice

i like this. being woken up from a deep sleep and swept into passion.beautiful!

lol

yeah,isn't great waking up like that..there's nothing better to start your day,then waking up to an awesome lay..lil poem for ya lol.....thanks for reading and commenting....Ricklovin

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