INDIFFERENT

There's moments of doubt,
there's moments of clarity.
Sad that the latter of the
two,lacks any regularity.
They speak of chance,and
I hear them speak of fate.
Hard for me to be optimistic,
with a heart learning to hate.
Have a little faith,leave it
in the hands of the gods.
I see the worlds current state,
I'd rather make my own odds.
About me finding out,if theres
any meaning to my existence.
Right now it doesn't matter,
lost within this indifference.

Good Piece

Reads and flows really well, good write,
Dave

thanks

thanks alot dave!
Ricklovin

Rick~

Expect and accept that plans will not go accordingly, there you will find optimism!

~Nell

wow

that's nice,I like that one...thanks nell
Ricklovin

Rick

You'll come thru this, my friend...and you'll be pleasently surprised

geat poem

Ricklovin a meaningful heartfelt write about the state of the World today hugs from Willow

thanks willow

willow,its been so long since I've heard from you I thought perhaps you've forgotten about me lol..hope all is well,thanks a bunch for the comment and for reading!
Ricklovin

nice.....

flows nicely=]
heart learning to hate???...i hope not mister..lol
nice write tho

snuggly bug .x.x.

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