I GIVE UP!

I love you but I give up,
I just can't anymore.
You've made it too hard,
its turned into a chore.
Its worse than boot camp,
I'd rather be in the core.
Might as well be,seems
like we're always at war.
At first when we met,I
thought I had scored.
Quickly you became the
woman I most adored.
But It all fell apart,who's
fault was it,mine or yours.
Break up,meet up again
then its just like before.
Must've had other options
you had wanted to explore.
So the women I most loved,
is the one I will now ignore.
I know its hard to believe,
did your jaw hit the floor.
Now take a good long look,
my ass is out the door.

Ricklovin

This reads just like a rap song, doesnt it?
Omg, its really really good too!
Put it to music and make a million rick...
Linda

lol

I would've never have guessed you listen to rap lol ..I was just fooling around,"her" and I got into it that day so I wrote about it a lil..personally,I like to listen to rock,metal,thrash music mostly..don't know if it would make a good rock song though lol.thanks for the comment linda!

Ricklovin

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