I'M SO DONE WITH YOU
That's it,I've completly had it
with all your bullshit,ok..
Don't want to hear another lie,
or anything you'd want to say..
I absoulutly refuse to play your
stupid little games anylonger..
You must think im so-o-o weak,but
you've only made me stronger..
I can see through it all now,its all
become so very clear to me..
I didn't want to admit it,but you
and I were never meant to be..
When its all said and done,you'ill
never hear from me again,EVER!..
I don't want to know anything of
you,all ties have to be severed..
Im done,through,no more,its over,
dont you even try to pass go..
Sould have known better,but instead,
you"ll have to reap what you sow..
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Hi Ricklovin
I'm glad you got this "out" of your system.
Poetry is great for that, isnt it?
This is a good write, nice going!
Linda
yeah it is
I don't think its totally out of my system yet lol,but im gettin there,thanks so much linda for all the comments...
loved it!
i loved this! your poems are simple yet so blunt. i like them alot. ive felt this, so i know what you are talking about. great job!-mona-
thanks mona
I like simple,im a simple kind of man,everything is so complicated nowadays don't you think? thanks again mona...
loved it!
i loved this! your poems are simple yet so blunt. i like them alot. ive felt this, so i know what you are talking about. great job!-mona-
awww
im beginning 2 feel sorry 4 u Rick ..lmao
this woman seems to be having a big effect on your lyf
why do u bother? is she worth it that much?
i kinda hope u really are done with her but i dont think u are ????
love your poem tho, its amazing ..as usual
snuggly bug .x.x.
to me she's worth it!!
Ricklovin
Can't choose who we love!!
Ricklovin
Can't choose who we love!!
Awww,don't feel sorry...I wish I were done,but its still not totally out of my system yet...I was actually with her just a few days ago lol....To me,I think she's worth every word I've written about her,I love her dumb ass lol..don't know why though,she really hasn't earned it,its wierd I know,but,it is what it is.... if you read "her poem fun with poetry" that's the girl in the majority of my poems..her name is spelled out in it...she has a poem with her name in it,now tell me,is that sweet or what lol...thanks again snuggs,I always enjoy reading your comments.........xoxoxox.....Ricklovin
aww...sweet
wel rick, if you think shes worth it then she must be ;-)
gosh-> i wish a guy was lyk dat with me n cud put up with all the crap..lol
gud luk anwayz + i hope evrithing works out 4 de best
snuggly bug .x.x.
Nice!
Nice! The frustration and anger in this poem speaks volums. And you are 100% right on top of that if this is true. Good poem.
As rich and purposeless as is the rose: Thy simple doom is to be beautiful. - Stephen Phillips, Marpessa
wooooow
Scarlet this was just about a year ago,and I'm still writing poems about this woman.that's so sad isn't it?I was certainly frustrated when I wrote this.I have some that I never posted from when I first started writing about her.they aren't very good since I had just started writing poetry,but I was thinking of posting them anyway just as I wrote them.its what I felt at the time so I think they're relevant to the whole chasing wanda thing I got going here lol.thanks for the comment and the read.have a good night.
Ricklovin
Can't live with them...
...can't carry them out back and shoot them either! Buddy, I feel for ya, one extreme to the other, seems like there is no middle ground. "Better to have loved and lost"...I think you know that line. At least you knew what so many miss out on. Love can be such a beautiful thing and then turn into your worst nightmare when you're least expecting it. Better to get it out of your system and go on with your life than to keep beating a dead horse. Great vent, no looking back now, but don't give up! Love will find you when you least expect it!~Ron
*"whenever in doubt, dream...inspiration will happen when you least expect it.." r/k 2-2009
http://members.tripod.com/Ron_Kinard
:P
great just great =]
ty
Thanks a bunch tom. Ricklovin