HER LAST POEM

Im officially making a promise to myself
that's effective immediately...
To never again write anything about how
and what you might mean to me...
You see,you have been a constant source of
inspiration in most of my attempts at writing...
But to you all the times we have shared
together,are not even worth me citing...
I thank you,because of you, my book of
poetry is at the point of being filled...
All the writing I've done about you,has only
helped to increase my poetic skills...
Although I leave without your love,I still
take something from this torrid affair...
And knowing that I did all I could possibly
do,to show you how much I really care...
Its hard to know that im not what you've
always been looking for in a man...
But it is what it is,you can't love me for me,
and I cant be anything else but who I am...
Honestly,its a shame you won't ever know
my love,one might even say its a crime...
So now I leave you with this poem,one that
i've written for you,for the very last time...

WOW! That was very strong.

WOW! That was very strong. It always is strong when you write from the heart. I feel your pain. "If you leave me, then your leaving the best...And if you leave the best, then you have to settle for less."

"If you can control your words, you can control the world" - John Melikyan

thanks

Dude thanks for commenting....I really apreciate it......Ricklovin

No prob

Bored at work, reading poems and commenting them :) I really did like this one!

"If you can control your words, you can control the world" - John Melikyan

Brilliant poem

Well done Ricklovin for a brilliant poem you have composed from the heart and very meaningful loved it from Willow

thanks

Thanks willow,glad you liked it....it most likely won't be her last one though lol....Ricklovin

I hope not Ricklovin

I sincerely hope it wont be your last poem ricklovin,I enjoy your poems ,
I had one to go this morning but deleted it all by mistake lol how bad is that ,my grandaughter showed me once,how to get back what you delete ,something I have to do on the keyboard but I forgot what she said ,so will just have to wait until she gets up it is too early to ring her hope she can help me I have forgotten what I wrote lol that is age for you from willow.

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