DoWN BUt NOt OUt

I made all the choices,
I listened to the voices.
They've all lead me here,
regrets all so sincere.
Life is but a wicked game,
I've nothing to proclaim.
Mine is such a sad tale,
a libra without its scales.
My world in total disarray,
does he not listen as I pray.
All I've asked for is a hand,
must not be part of the plan.
Its all up to me now I guess,
to clean up my own mess.
That's the way it should be,
who better other than me.
There's so much to overcome,
pray that I can get it all done.
I'll be fine so don't you doubt,
I may be down but im not out.

Nice poem and rhyme schemes.

Nice poem and rhyme schemes. Sorry to hear you're down, Rick. Hope you feel better soon. Peace, NSF

thanks

thanks alot,im good...hey thanks for reading and for the comment...Ricklovin

nice.... =]

this poem is sooo relatable to me!!!!!
it reminds me of a very close person in my life!!!!
freakishly relatable actually ..lol
Anyhoo.....keep strong bro....u'll never be out ;)
loved the poem

snuggly bug .x.x.

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