True Love Flowin' Free

Our senses in tune to these blissful sensations,
where hopes have awakened through seasonal glee.
Our passions in bloom to life's grand jubilations.
Just can't be mistaken, true love flowin' free.

So splendid this place in the warmth of the sunlight,
where butterflies flutter each step of our way.
So tender your grace here to shine in the daylight.
The flow of true love, it has found you with me.

The skies now aglow with your sweetness beside me.
New dreams in the making, and more soon to be.
Of heart, dear, and soul, with you close to remind me.
Just can't be mistaken, true love flowin' free.

'Cause clear be the glory, when shared be the story
of heavenly comforts within all we've planned.
Entwined the emotion, love's promise in motion.
Of heartfelt devotion, each moment at hand.

Our senses in tune to these blissful sensations,
where hopes have awakened through seasonal glee.
Our passions in bloom to life's grand jubilations.
Just can't be mistaken, true love flowin' free.

When Love finds it way to Rex

Leaking Pen
Wow Rex

When Love finds it way to Rex

Leaking Pen
Wow Rex
In England they say : God save the queen , in romantic poetry, I say god save Rex, wish I could be the person who wrote this poem, what a beautiful serenade to love, and above all what bliss to be in love, true love that binds nature to poetry, I gladly will give up my lonesome freedom to be captured in the net of love, how lovely to dwell in the house of the living, for to be in love is to be alive! Please wake me up again and again , remind me what romantic poetry is all about!
Truly
Paul

Thank you so much, Paul...

Thank you so much, Paul, for your uplifting and encouraging critique. Your kind and thoughtful comments truly mean a great deal to me. I am so glad that you enjoyed this, and came to view it in a worthwhile way. I had mainly just set out to express some peaceful, heartfelt emotions to be shared in a warm, scenic place. I had tried to make it come across as both sincere and romantic, feeling at peace while I wrote it. Thank you again for your wonderful, inspiring critique, as well as the time you took to read my work. Take care, Paul.

Respectfully,
J.P. (Rex)

Core of Your Being

J.P.,

One cannot write poetry like this without feeling it to the core of their being. Your love poetry is as majestic as a sunset. You are not messing around, you know where the key to love is and your music is as beautiful as it gets. I am so happy for you dear J.P., you know how to love.

Love,

Kathy

Fort Lauderdale, Florida

Thank you, Kathy, for your beautiful critique...

Thank you so much, Kathy, for your beautiful, refreshing critique. I sincerely appreciate your warm and lovely words, as well as the time you took to read my poem. I remember feeling inspired and at ease while I wrote this, and had basically just attempted to express some of my thoughts and emotions relating to love, comfort, and true admiration. It means a lot to me to know that you came to see this in a positive and refreshing way. Thanks again, Kathy, for your kind, heartwarming critique on my work. Take care, and God bless you.

Love,
J.P. (Rex)

Well composed

Hi Rex
Very well written and seeetly romantic,
I enjoyed it
Kate

Well composed

Hi Rex
Very well written and seeetly romantic,
I enjoyed it
Kate

Thank you so much, Kate...

Thank you so much, Kate. I'm really glad that you enjoyed this, and came to view it in a meaningful and pleasant type of a way. Your warm and thoughtful comments are highly inspiring to me. I had just hoped to make it come across as peaceful, heartfelt, and sincere...relating to the emotions I had felt at the time. Take care, Kate, and thanks again. I truly appreciate the time you took to both read and comment on my work.

Respectfully,
J.P. (Rex)

Lovely & Romantic

This poems flows so very well. Rhyme structure is really nice. Very passionate to say the least.

Wonderfully penned.

Thank you, Sourav, for your kind, uplifting comments.

Thank you so much, Sourav, as I truly appreciate your kind and uplifting comments in relationship to my work. I'm just glad that you enjoyed this, and came to view it in a worthwhile way. I continue to set out to express my truest heartfelt feelings and emotions, as I am always moved and inspired by these thoughts pertaining to love, romance, and the beauty of nature. Thanks again, Sourav, for your thoughtful and considerate critique on my poem. Take care.

Respectfully,
J.P. (Rex)

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