A Calling Of Love

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A love, it came calling, a love with a voice.
It offered us music, and we made the choice.
The choice to awaken, inside of its song.
A love, it came calling, and we sang along.

A love we'd believed in, through faith and through prayer.
A love for escaping, and taking us where,
the promise is given, to not be denied,
through faith ever present, and glowing inside.

A love, it came calling, a love with a voice.
A love brought us music, and we made the choice.
The choice, dear, to follow, our hearts all the way.
A love, it came calling, with so much to say.

A love well inspired, revealed through grace.
A love we desired, we both came to trace.
Through ways of the spirit, that shines deep within,
we found us the pathway, to where we begin.

A love, it came calling, a love with a voice.
It offered us music, and we made the choice.
It grew through our passions, and led us to song,
for we knew within it, our hearts did belong.

Your Love Soars So High

J.P.,

They say the 3rd time is a charm. This is my 3rd attempt to get a comment to you, buddy. The Poetry Showcase is having major technical problems these days. I have had trouble with all submissions.

I opened this beautiful love song when I woke up at 6:30 AM this Valentine's day. It sings like a bell, so clear.

This is an awesome expression of love and I loved it.

May love rule the day today and always,

Kathy

Dallas, Texas

Thank you so much, Kathy...

Thank you so much, Kathy. I truly appreciate the time you took to both read and critique this. It is so very inspiring to receive such warm and kind comments from someone who writes poetry as beautifully impressive as you do, Kathy. I am sincerely moved and encouraged by your thoughtful and constructive reviews of my work. In this, I had mainly just wanted to try and express some of my deeper feelings and emotions pertaining to spiritual love, and I felt quite at ease while I was writing it. Thanks again, Kathy, for your lovely and glowing critique on this. Take care, and God bless you.

Respectfully,
J.P. (Rex)

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