WHAT GOES AROUND COMES AROUND
Sore throat from trying to hold back the tears.
shaking hands that rest on her heart.
Sitting on the same chair for years.
Her loved ones so very far apart.
The clock is ticking and the weather is cold.
The sun she once played in was grey and gone.
She never thought that it hurt like this to be old.
She never knew if she'd make it till dawn.
Her five children that she lovingly rared.
Where nowhere at all to be seen.
This feeling she had that none of them cared.
She was at the lowest point she'd ever been.
She wept alone in the room her chilren had paid for.
She witnessed the cruel thanks for all her hard work.
She ate food of a prisoner and would collapse on the floor.
Her only company in the corner,was were her shadow would lurk.
The day came when she felt an awareness.
The darkness lifted from her mind.
She was overwhelmed and almost careless.
And to sorrow she was blind.
Her soul had left her body and she felt more alive than the living.
Her hurt and pain were at an end and she was more than relieved.
She was done with all the cruely of age and the grief that she was given.
All the injustice and neglect she most certainly recieved.
Now sleep and rest with God knowing all your hurt.
Smile and know that from all your pain you gained peaceful wait.
Your children weep as they see your body buried in the dirt.
But where were they when you cried out through that homes big black gate?
But woe to them who forget their elders, and fathers and mothers.
Woe to them who ignore their every whim.
We must value them as precious jewels, like them there are no others.
Seek their prayers and pray for them for this life is much too dim.
And when you grow old and wither all your petals, be very sure to know.
That life is not complete till what goes around comes around.
And when the kids get tall and their bright eyes glow.
They too will leave you in a room, then weep when you meet the ground.
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So Sad That This Is True Far Too Often
repenter,
You broke my heart with this poem because I know how true it can be and how totally wrong it is. I too have a piece about aged lonliness called "Lonliness Interrupted", would you like me to post it. It's not as long or indicting as yours but it does have a similar theme.
My friend, in couple of the lines you misspelled woe as wo, you might want to correct that.
By the way, you might want to read my latest posting, you have been immortalized in it along with my other buddies.
Pete
Pete.......
Im ever so pleased that you connected with my write, and I appreciate when u take the time to comment on my work....I will definately look up ''Lonliness Interrupted'' and I cant wait to see your latest post....thnx again and peace.
I haven't posted it yet
But I will just for you. I will do it right now. Check it out.
Pete
old age loneliness is
old age loneliness is something that i find so very sad,when all said and done life is in some ways a circle...what you give comes around and i don't know why we forget that...thank you for the poem.
ur very welcome mimi,
and thank u for the comment....thats a good way to put it...like a circle...peace.