Thoughts Of You
Sparkling like the star infested skies,
your eyes.
Glowing like the dancing sun ablaze,
your gentle ways.
Heavy like rock of gold sitting priceless in a cave,
your will to push, so brave.
Loud like the thunder storm and its lessons,
your dignity and presence.
Fragrant like the musk of 'Uud,
your energy and blood.
Deep and silent like the lonely dead sea,
I never hear your thoughts of me.
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Hey, RP!
This is such a good write! For a moment I thought it may be about God, for it felt that way, at least to me. This is definately one of your best for a smaller piece, as it captures that 'moment' and 'feeling' like the writer is speaking directly to us. Hope that makes sense, i know i waffle on!
DEbs x
thanx Debs...
thanks for reading and commenting, Im glad u enjoyed it and Im chuffed u think its one of my best smaller writes.....and u do make sense to me and I appreciate when u waffle, cuz ur waffling is always so kind, peace.
Repenter
It sounds as though you man is a solid rock who doen't have much to say or am I missing the whole point. It was well written so it must be me. I'm a little worn.
Your friend,
Pete
Pete....
this was about someone I love and admire greatly, but, like u thought, this person isn't the easiest to read, has alot to say but just wont say it...maybe it's a good thing, who knows.....thanks 4 reading and commenting, peace.
Ah my friend
I may be off on my thoughts on this one,maybe not your intent at all.What I read is, here is what I think of you,where do I stand? I like it.
Gloria
thats exactly what I meant Gloria....
yep, u got it......thanks for reading and commenting, peace.