LET ME...
Let me be your blanket when you are feeling cold,
Let me be your memories, for when we both grow old.
Let me be your voice for when you're shy to speak.
Let me be your smiles when it's comfort that you seek.
Let me hold your hand, and guide you down life's road.
Let me hold your troubles and this worlds nasty load.
Let me hold your face, to tell you that I care.
Let me hold your heart, to let you know I'm there.
Let me be the cloth that wipes away your tears.
Let me be the advise that whispers in those ears.
Let me be the remedy for every ache and pain.
Let me be the one, to polish every lesson's stain.
Let me in, when you are scared and when you're feeling small.
Let me in, so that I may make you, once again feel tall.
Let me in, so I can see how beautiful God has made you.
Let me in, so that I can help with every lesson that He gave you.
Let me see your shining eyes, and let me see your grace.
Let me see the lines of aging decorate your glowing face.
Let me see the little girl that grew in every possible good way.
Let me see my blessings, my sweet darling, each and every day!.
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so sweet
this is very sweet poem.
Beautiful Write
Just beautiful,
Dave
Dave...
thnx 4 reading and commenting, peace.
Turning the corner
Repenter,
Lovely write. Appears that you've turned the corner and see better times ahead. Wishing you all the best.
Dolan
Dolan....
I always appreciate comments from u, thnx 4 the best wishes and peace.
bravo
bravoooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo!you would be so easy to work with for any half decent musician who could make your great words turn his or her tunes into hits.seek them out and you may find another mccartney as lennon did.and elton was getting nowhere till he met his writer.
clydeseer....
wow, ur comment gave me much confidence and I appreciate you reading my work and leaving such joyful comments, peace.
ah!
You've poured your heart out here. No doubt that she must be a lovely girl. She deserves (as does any child) all the best.
If we all were to practice the sentiments contained in your poem, the world truly would be a better place. Let me...
applaud you for this positve poem!
thanks poetmaster...
I should have thanked u sooner, I didnt realize till now that u commented on the piece......glad u like it, and yes she is a wonderful child,thank u....peace