HE AND SHE......SO MANY OF THEM.

He's stressed as he sits at his desk and all those meetings he attends.
He has to go home to a moaning wife so he stays out as long as he can.
He has to compete and entertain all of his family and freinds.
When he finaly comes home, his dinner is cold, this poor unfortunate man!

His hands worn and his shirt all torn,
His back gone numb from the lifting.
His son out all day collecting the corn.
His mind forever from his life just drifting.
He waits all day in this dirt and rubble just waiting to kiss his wife.
They see each other once a week but she is why he does this to his life.

She's crying on the kitchen floor cuz she just found out he's cheating.
Smashes the house and packs up her things to leave this awful life.
This wasnt the way, the future she was seeking.
So she threw her ring in his face, this poor unfortunate wife

Her cracked bare feet as they pound on the floor,
Her family depend on her and her caring.
The children waiting for food as they lurk in the door.
She's only got one loaf but they make do sharing.
She hears the whimpering from hunger as her babies try to sleep.
The rain of fire that showers her home is more than she can bare.
The sanity, the calmness, comfort she finds so hard to keep.
The smoky mist around her land is what she breaths as air.

He stamps his foot on the bedroom floor.
He wanted the other remote control car.
Says he hates his mum, then slams the door.
Wishing he lived away somewhere far.

But far away she stands before her broken home.
She can't find her family and she knows.
She's left there to survive on her own.
But far away, that's just how life goes.

People of this world unite and see the pain we ignore.
See the hunger and killing of one too many wars.
What do we stand silent for?
When our world is bleeding from the core!

SO MANY OF THEM

this was very nice to read,
but I do not think that; so many of them in this world now.
nice ,
and thanks too

ooooh ubuntu......there are....there really are...

there are people living in even worse condition than that, so many that the world should be ashamed.....so many like in ....india...africa.....china....so many other places I'd be here all day!

hehehehe

"I'd be here all day!" hehehehehehehehe
ok, I agree with you.

The Typical Family

It's sad that this is the typical family these days... just filled with chaos once dad gets home from a long day at work, the house flips upside down. Good 1 Repenter(lolz)~~B.E.Coast

respect brotha!.....

appreciate the comment Bryce.....peace.

A Good Start

Repenter,

You had me going with this one but I can't help feeling that you got me to the ledges edge and then just shoved me off. In other words, I don't feel this is a finished piece, you have so much more to tell us. Please go back and finish it.

Your friend and believer,

Pete

oh my God!......

I felt the same way, but you know, I always feel my poems are too dragged out, im a bit like Charles Dickons that way....to much detail,,,I always fear I'll bore the reader.....but if you think it needs a proper ending, I will take your advise with both hands.....thanks again Pete....peace.

My Pleasure

repenter,

You know I'm only here to help you get better and to reach the potential that you have in abundance.

Your buddy,

Pete

PS: Linda's gonna buy a copy of my book! Yippee

she's not the only one.....

Ive considered it my self.....peace.

Nice Sentiments, Too Bad Most Won't Listen and Heed

repenter,

Mankind being what it is does not bode well for the end og greed, avarice and intolerence. Unfortunately people of menace will still find their way into positions of power and the masses will not know how to rise up and defeat them.

Discouraging isn't it,

Pete

u hit the nail on the head Ergo.....

u are so right.....crap leaders.....weak followers......history just keeps repeating!....when will we learn?
[ except one leader.....I have to say to put my heart at rest...prophet muhammed the guide to mankind].....hey , did u know I just found out myself recently that child benefit began when umar ibn al khattab, khalifa in islam, sent out an order that no child should go hungry, and that up untill recently, the back of every child benefit book in Ireland had these words printed ......By order of the 3rd khalifa in islam, Umar ibn al Khattab.......that is completely true!....its amazing cuz the country in originated in does not follow this law.sad....reality...Im just blabbering now, hehehe.....I need to get out more, lol.peace,

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