Buv Buv Buv
Buv, buv, buv.My heart is on a quest.
My heart wont give up untill my body found the best.
And when I've found the key to the room that stores my fate.
I'll open it with pleasure and see it there so great.
I'll take my time and smile with pride.
No more secrets for me to hide.
Buv, buv, buv.My heart is on a mission!
courage is my soul, my faith my ammunition.
And when I found the road to stride along in ease.
I'll stroll head high upon it, and feel lifes gentle breeze.
I'll take my time and pray and know,
its the only way to feed my soul and grow.
Buv, buv, buv.My heart is on protest.
I wont accept the evil plans and faces I detest.
I wont allow myself to taste their food of lies.
Their choice of clever words that muffle nations cries.
And I will watch as they rise high for a moment in our time.
But then I'll grin and raise my chin when God washes out their crime.
Buv, buv, buv.My heart is on a roll.
My heart is ticking like a bomb and will one day free my soul.
My time on earth it has a limit and I am just like you.
The difference is that my goal is a goal of very few.
I seek forgiveness as I repent, and repenter is my name.
But despite what I believe in, the colour of our blood is still the same.
You and I, you laugh, I sigh, you think that you are free.
But you dont know the half of it, the other half is me.
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Buv, buv, buv
repenter,
this it was very nice one, I think you were in the mood when you write it.
Thanks for your sharing ...
Hi My Friend
Repenter,
As I was reading this piece it became obvious to me that it is in need of editing. I won't touch your product without your implicit approval. If you would like to help in editing this piece I am happily offering my services. What I would do is make suggestions, I will not alter your piece, it would be up to you to accept or reject my suggestions. Let me know your wishes my friend.
Pete
Hi Pete,
ur the poet here so any advise....I will grab with both hands....
although I thought it was pretty good not being big headed and all...hehehe.
I would love your input and I appreciate that you think its a poem worth your time and correction....hope its not a bother to u though...
thanks for your guidance and helping hand.....peace.
Hi there my friend
repenter,
Tomorrow I will have ample time to go over your piece for you, I hope that works for you.
Pete
appreciate it Pete....
tomorrow is grand thanks.....peace.
Buv,Buv,Buv
Hi Repenter,thanks for your kind comment on Leap Of Faith.Having read your poem,can you tell me what your faith is,because by the sound of it,you are still looking.By the way,I think your writing is fine.God bless,Mike.
versode,
well the poem was really actually about fate, not faith....
if u have read my other work Im sure u will soon come to realise what I believe in and I am truly happy and at peace with my faith, Im still young but I have stopped looking a long time ago.....without my faith I would not be the woman I am now and I thank our Lord every day for this peace and ease in my heart.
thanks for the kind comment and peace be with u, repenter86.
Buv
Sorry to get it wrong,the first verse indicated a search.Anyway,still a great poem and if you are interested,come and have a look at Versical Rhymes,a Christian poets site I've just started up to bring together poets and their gifts.The link is: http://versical.ning.com/
God Bless,Mike.
thanks verseode....
the first verse reflected my search for love(a man)....Ive been in and out of love for a while....I want to get it right this time, and thanks for the link....ill check it out...peace.