Pain.

P for the Perfect guy you are
P for the Pretty face she has
P for the Pathetic thing I am
P for the Price I’m paying
P for the Poems I write for your sake

A for the Ache I’ve been feeling
A for the Addiction I can’t get rid of
A for the Absurd way I’ve been dressing
A for the Angelic way she looks
A for the Addmission of betrayal I won’t let you make

I for the Immortal love I feel for you
I for the Indefinite relationship you both share
I for the Ink I bleed on these pages
I for the Illusion I’m focusing my eyes on
I for the I love you’s you are willing to fake

N for Never, is when I’m you’re only one
N for the Nights I spend crying
N for the Nobody I am
N for the Naive silly me
N for the Number of pills I take

Put it all together, and it’s the story of my life,
The fairytale of me, him, and her.

Wow

this is so so sad, each word more remorseful than the last-but I've never read anything like this before, nor in this style either-it really caught my attention. keep it up, writing your feelings makes it hurt just a tiny bit less :) ♥

That's so true!

Writing is therapy! Thanks so much for you read and your kind comment ♥

It is

the best kind around! no problem, and thanks for the buddy request! :D ♥

i love it! a great way to

i love it! a great way to describe pain that is caused by love's wrong doing. you have manged to get the feelings so exact i.e n is for the naive silly me and i for the illuson. we have all been there the thing we choose to belive for the sake of love. Great Poem!

=]

"the thing we choose to believe for the sake of love"
That's exactly what I was talking about!
Thank you for your comment :)

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