How Do I Get Rid Of This Feeling?

It was a series of bad choices
That gave birth to these inner voices
They grew to sad worn out faces
Which were faked to smiles on a daily basis
I was wrong when I used my heart to do the math
I was wrong when I let you choose me this path
This is not what I wished for
I’m what you want, but you want more
Lock your windows and your doors
I do what you want, I’m yours
But you don’t own me, in fact, I owe you
This is not we wanted, but it’s what we wished for
Let us fight now, let us start war
Eyes to the ceiling
How do I get rid of this feeling?

wow raw and hard

i love it
it reminds me of me when i was younger or something but man u really got some skill there. i can feel the emotions you felt. you have about two errors from what i see were you forgot words.other than that its a great poem. hmmm am talken to much now a days.

:D

Thank you, it's so cool how a poem shows feelings.
Can you tell me the two errors please? :D

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