the dance

Take my hand
nod
smile.
Slowly,
awkwardly
finding the movement
the rhythm.
Go left
then right
look down at my
feet,
oops,
sorry.
Smile again
go right
then left
together
this time,
there it is,
that's right.
Moving to the music
here and there
around together,
then apart arms extended.
A laugh pops out.
Back to right and left
in unison now.
The pleasure of
the dance
brings a smile.
Try a spin
and a dip
more laughter.
Such a silly
feeling.
Ahh,
the music is done.
The dance is
done.
What a wonderful
dance.
How about
another?
4/07

Well done

I really like this piece. You captured well the moment.

David E. Young
www.davideyoung.com

capture

Thanks for reading and commenting I had a great time capturing the moment. raskin

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