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swirling red leaves

Posted September 27th, 2008 by raskin

breeze loosens the leaves
I watch as the tree lets go
colors float then fall
swirling red, yellow, orange
I stop look and smile at you

sweet poem

On October 16th, 2008 mimi says:

sweet poem

thanks mimi

On October 16th, 2008 raskin says:

appreciate your comment. I saw the tree across the street from my house let leaves go and I was watching them. I was reminded of a dance, kind of silly. raskin

poem

On October 16th, 2008 LonesomePine333 says:

check out my poem Red Leaf It is also short

thank you

On October 16th, 2008 raskin says:

for reading and leaving a comment. raskin

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