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simple

Posted September 6th, 2008 by raskin

wishes like dreams pop
balloons float into the sky
loving simple times

Perfect

On September 18th, 2008 JewelPhoenix says:

Simple, but perfect in every single way, the lines flowed into the next with a good rhythm, lovely ♥

Thanks for the

On September 18th, 2008 raskin says:

nice comment. I like the heart at the end nice touch. raskin

great haiku Raskin

On September 18th, 2008 willow says:

I loved this one yes dreams do seem to pop like balloons a great write hugs from Willow

thanks willow

On September 18th, 2008 raskin says:

for the nice comment, dreams float as well. raskin

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