Silence shines down

goblet runs over
resting on the cusp of love
moons silence shines down

raskin

There is a moment of love's calmness and closeness imbued inthese words and I like it. You are certainly mastering this format and may I offer my congrats and let you know that I am proud of your efforts.

Pete

Thanks Pete

I get a phrase then start to work around that. I start counting and fitting into the puzzle, funny strange isn't it. I don't know what appeals to readers, I know what I like and write that. raskin

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