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scents of the fall

Posted September 25th, 2008 by raskin

keeping my eyes closed
breeze lightly brushes my hair
capturing the scents
memories filled with laughter
each fall I'm wrapped in your arms

I'm lovin the scent in here

On September 25th, 2008 Bryce E Coast says:

It's a refreshing and homely smell,, and i feel a certain warmth reading it..{no i didn't pee on myself}.niceun rask» *Bryce*

thanks bryce

On September 26th, 2008 raskin says:

for your two cents, you always provide such a breath of fresh air. raskin

In just a few lines this

On September 26th, 2008 McMongrel says:

In just a few lines this puts an image in my mind.

thanks

On September 26th, 2008 raskin says:

mcmongrel for the comment, glad you enjoyed the image. raskin

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