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Kernels of kindness
Incandescent kindling
A climbing, curling
Conversation or
Creative cloud kisses
Expressive grins emerge
Like kites of curiosity
Candles of eloquence
Keeping us warm
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Nicely done Raz
David o Whalen...The last four lines expressed quite imaginatively. You're developing the ability to see things just a tad differently, and then putting that description in words.
Not an easy thing to do. You expressed "kites, curiousity and candles" in a way that most wouldn't have thought of.
Loft
Nice you picked up on that. Kindness can lift your spirits
and I tried to bring that out. All the while keeping the
sound right. I'm taking more time when I write a poem,
more intent on the wording. Great comment David,
gave me something I can learn from. Thanks!
raskin