misfortune of Paddy
A young man named Paddy sat in an alley
he was all clammery to touch that mammary
a sad chap was he realizing it wasn't so easily
as misfortune would have it he reached the wrong valley
sat Paddy in the alley with only a memory of a dally
- raskin's blog
- Login or register to post comments
- 105 reads
hahaha
Ronald J. Edwards
Trinity Ink
http://trinityinkexperiencestrengthandhope.blogspot.com
that bloke sure made a mistake now didn't he.... great write raskin
ron
thanks
this was something silly I was trying out, I still need a lot of work though. I'm trying to get the rhythm and flow right so I'll keep trying, but I am glad it was funny. raskin
loved this one
A great poem made me laugh well written and I loved the rhyme hugs from Willow
Thanks willow
These are experiments I'm going to keep trying eventually I'll get it. Thanks for reading and the nice comment. raskin