Little cabin

The little cabin sat on a grassy hill,
poplars, aspen, white pines surrounded it,
overlooking a lake, trees everywhere
not another soul in sight.
Kerosene lamps were abundant
in the evening they were lit,
while the nightly poker game was played.
I sat next to the screen listening,
to crickets, frogs all the night noises,
looking out into the dark, the stars, the shadows.
Morning light would wake me,
sunrise, I'd walk down to the dock.
Watching as the fish would jump,
the turtle heads would stick up,
the lily pads extended out into the lake.
I thought they were inspiration
wishing I could walk on each one,
I didn't fish I just imagined.
All the while waiting for the others to wake
so they could bait my rod.

:)

Ronald J. Edwards
Trinity Ink
http://trinityinkexperiencestrengthandhope.blogspot.com

i enjoyed reading your glimpse into your past, thank you for sharing these memories

ron

thanks for reading and commenting

this was a beautiful spot we went to rustic, there was a water pump in the kitchen no electricity, an outhouse. This one trip my sister and I slept together and when we got home the two of us had mumps on opposite sides, we sat around with diapers tied around our chins holding them up. raskin

raskin

This whole piece was a piece of wonderment and then you put the freakin cherry right on top with the last two lines. I freakin love it.

Well done,

Pete

Nice comment Pete

I like to fish I just can't bait a hook still. raskin

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