Life is so dear

Life is so dear

What seeds like thoughts or dreams
lay dormant near Walden pond?
I’ve wondered as I weeded.

All the while I’m wary
of the red winged black bird
wavering near the bulrushes,
a constant threat in my garden.
Like the voles they are wriggling rascals
that vex me.

Pondering the uncultivated plants
those considered noxious, were
they pulled by Thoreau’s own hand?
Weeds are real, as are flowers.
Worthy and hardy fellows each has it’s age
and sometime it’s hard to tell which is which.

Through thickets and brambles
we create our own paths of exploration,
I suppose we all crave order
within our own designs.

For me there is nothing I want more
than to lay here and watch
clouds roll by, tumbleweeds in the air.
I'll save order for another day...

Pure Gold Raskin

You paint a beautiful picture here with your words Raskin, nice to read you again, Hugs from Willow

Thanks Willow

for your lovely comment.
raskin

I wish everyone...

David o Whalen Would take your last verse and adopt it as their way to live life. Wouldn't that be beautiful?

Emerson and Thoreau

I ran across an article regarding global warming and the details of flowers blooming when he lived at Waldon pond.
I read Thoreau's book about his stay there many years ago, along with Emerson's essays. I'm revisiting them now. Got me inspired.
Thanks for your comment David, always appreciated.
raskin

In good company

Leaking Pen
Dear Raskin

Why am I drawn to your poetry? I might not know much, but I know all about the genuine article, you are in good company with Thoreau and Emerson, "For there is nothing I want more" but to dwell on your poetry
you paint from the heart of nature -human nature- I love the ride from verse one uncertainties, to the great climax finale, this poem the perfect symphonic synthesis of mind and soul, you have awakened the pilgrim and the philosopher in me!

Truly
Paul

Paul,

Your comments just blow me away. So descriptive and philosophical
and emotional. Thank you for your creative exuberance.
raskin

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