Last memory
Gazing through eyes
faded from time,
white hair, thinned.
A breeze caught strands,
touching her old wrinkled cheeks,
she squinted looking out
into the great expanse before her.
Sunrise, glorious color
spreads across the horizon,
the lake rests calmly,
reflecting the glow.
She drew in a breath of cold air,
sighing, watching as steam
swirled in the morning light.
The sand drew warmth from her,
she was fixed to that spot, waiting.
Re-adjusting the blanket that covered her,
it wasn't for warmth, but that was fine.
She watched as clouds came and went,
breathing in and out,
time passed
as the cold air seeped closer,
an embrace.
Soon the sand would be as cold as she,
finally as the sun was setting
her eyes closed.
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well done, dealing with
well done, dealing with "last memories"
mesmerizing, raskin...
A lovely poem - very well written.
joyce
Thanks to both of you
for reading and commenting, this one is special to me. The last memory of a life well lived is important to me. Acceptance of the whole body of ones life with all the vagaries that can occur. It really is a good rambling morning for me. raskin
raskin
The septh of love and admiration you held for this woman was permeating this whole piece about someone going out their own way and with peace and honor. I loved every second of this read.
Pete
thanks Pete
there is a story that goes with this, where it came from but it is wild and too long for these comments. raskin