it all just dissipates

A wisp,
I watched it
for a bit.

Trailing past,
then forward,
floating on currents.

Events collide
sometime.

I've thought a lot
about collisions,
bumps, bumping
agitation, abrasion
degradation
as events excelerate
control is lost.

All lost.

But what of a wisp
in a collision
it all just dissipates
then gone.

Nothingness,
was it ever there?

only you raskin

Can study a simple lile wisp and write good lines about it,I enjoy your poems as they are so natural,and yet uniquely yours, hugs from Willow

thanks willow

I was just playing around with form to see how it would come out. raskin

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