Glazed donuts
Gloria glanced at the glazed donuts, glistening.
She goosed Gordy,
take a gander at those goodies, she said.
The glass case glowed
giving the donuts a gleam.
Gosh, she said to Gordy,
aren't they gorgeous.
Glorious, Gordy replied
as he gazed at Gloria.
Her eyes glinted back at Gordy,
she clapped her hands with glee.
Grinning she said, Gordy,
let's get a dozen glazed donuts.
Gordy giggled and agreed.
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I love these writes of yours Rask, you sketch them so well and effortlessly.. we all like to do the haikus and tankas of the world, but i'm surprised more people don't tryout these twisters{they're fun reads!} »BRYCE
Thanks bryce
appreciate the nice comment. I love writing these things it's like playing for me. I love if someone reads them and smiles or laughs, I think that is rewarding. They are silly. There is a book I read to my kids it's called Hooray for Wodney Wat, I forget the author but it is marvelous, the words, illustrations. The magic of the words, story, and message I delight everytime I read it, it makes me smile and laugh. I hold that as the gold standard in tongue twisters. raskin
i like this :)
i like this, it is very enjoyable and it made me laugh
keep writing
Fartnitro
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I just love
that tag line, great pen name. That could spark the imagination, I must say. Thanks for reading and commenting, by the way. raskin
great poem Raskin
I just have a passion for glazed donuts,I love them this poem was just as good as they are yummy hugs from Willow
willow
thank you for the nice comment, I hope it gave you a bit of a laugh. I am fond of donuts but I have to limit them a bit. Savor what I do get. raskin
i was just begining to miss
i was just begining to miss your snotty writes and i came across this one..made me smiiiile
watch it
mimi I can take snot literally and write a ton about it. I have to get back to these I need a laugh. I've got a couple rolling around in my mind but nothing that's engaged. Thanks for the comment, I'm glad it makes you smile. raskin