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dark, moist leaves

Posted September 6th, 2008 by raskin

pointing his finger
looking towards the forest
chilly air met me
dark, moist leaves littered the ground
sitting down witnessing the growth

This is new

On September 7th, 2008 rrje4019 says:

Ronald J. Edwards
Trinity Ink
http://trinityinkexperiencestrengthandhope.blogspot.com

this is a somewhat new style lately for you raskin, I like it, nice poem
:)
ron

Yeah

On September 7th, 2008 raskin says:

I'm playing around with the tanka emoting in my own special way. Thanks for reading and commenting. raskin

FOLKS!!!!

On September 7th, 2008 RyanKrueSaunders says:

this is poetry

thanks

On September 7th, 2008 raskin says:

ryan I take it that there is a certain amount of approval. raskin

liked this one Raskin

On September 7th, 2008 willow says:

looking at the forest in a different way,at moist leaves followed by growth,I could almost smell the moist leaves thankyou from Willow

thanks willow

On September 7th, 2008 raskin says:

I suppose with this one some may see decay and endings but for me I see beginnings, growth, hope, renewal. I love the smell walking in a forest after the rain when all the leaves are down, it's quiet. raskin

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