Battalion of balloons
Bart bounded down the blacktop
he was a sight to behold
with all the balloons billowing behind him.
Always benevolent when the berserk
kids would besiege him,
he would bestow a balloon on each one.
It was all smiling bedlam before him,
they all looked up beaming
at the beautiful balloons, floating.
Bart was bashful but still
he beamed at the battalion of balloons
as they rose up into the air on this balmy day.
Beautiful.
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Fix The Title
Raskin,
Fix the title and this piece will float off even better.
Your buddy,
Pete
Balloon bedlam
what would you imagine? I'm open, once it's out of me it doesn't really matter. What would you like to call it? raskin
Let Me Explain
What I was referring to is to add another O to ballon in the title. See what I mean?
Pete
Help needed
An editor I'm not, I missed that in my proof reading. Thanks, I am laughing good eyes. raskin
No Problem
raskin,
It is always easier to see someone else's gaffe than our own anyway.
Pete
very sunny feel to the
very sunny feel to the poem,nice
I'm glad
you enjoyed it. I had fun thinking it up. raskin