babble at lunch

Belinda bolted after listening to the babble at lunch.
Backed into the bar for a beer and a shot,
her boyfriend beamed, by golly there she is.
Music blared as she sat her behind on the bench,
pulled a cigarette out of the pack lit it and the shot,
then breathed out smoke, Blair smiled.
Placing a finger in her ear to clear the babble out,
she let out a bombastic fuck it.
Loosening her blouse and bloomers drank the beer.
A deep belch emanated from below without a blink,
blessing those in the bleachers across the bar.
She smiled back at Blair, her beholden, blissfully.

raskin

How much fun this one was. Belinda obviouly truly enjoyed lunch with the ladies...NOT. A shot & a beer, a butt and a belch. My kind of woman no doubt.

Thanks for the laugh,

Pete

I hate to admit it, Pete

but I was going back in my memory on this one, there is a little belinda in me. I laughed pretty hard writing this and then reading it over. Thanks for reading and commenting, I'm glad you had a laugh on this one. raskin

raskin

Did i get it right?

Can you give me any idea why Beauty Rest, My Ass is getting no consideration at all?

Pete

yes

Pete you got it right. Pretty funny character. raskin

hey..raskin..how come i

hey..raskin..how come i missed this before..its really nice and funny..enjoyed it and the comments too blend so well with your poetry..

mimi

Glad you found it, I enjoy writing the funny stuff. There is a bit of this character in me, years ago when I was a wild thing I smoked and would light my shots on fire before drinking them, it was all great show but no one realized I was burning off some of the alcohol. raskin

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