about the grooves
I trace the line with my finger,
it wasn't drawn,
but etched
by time,
experience.
I thought about the grooves
as I touched each one
simple stuff really.
Creases around the eyes
reminding me of days in the sun.
I wasn't there but I can see.
Bringing a smile to my mouth
and to his as well.
Fascinated by his face
I watched as the crinkles extended out,
some were deep,
some fine
together
showing the joy that was there
for that moment.
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nice raskin
reallllllyyyyyy nice. i love this vision you have portrayed. a very sweet "loving touch"
Linda
thanks linda
I was thinking about this one all day trying to think about how to express the fascination I have for the lines on peoples faces. I think there is so much expression in them and movement. I like working an idea into words it's fun for me. raskin
You...
Are really good at doing that Raskin! I absolutely love this one !
Linda
I am
not sure what others like or not. I just post what I enjoy writing and I'm happy when someone else likes it. So thanks a lot for enjoying this one. raskin