~ A Sliver of Silver ~

Gently
Falling from
The midnight sky

A sliver of silver

Dropped
Into my
Open palm;

Slowly
It melted
Into a little

Silver pool

Caressing
Each fold,
Each crease;

Quiescent in quietude,
Coalescing
With the warmth
Of my hand;

There it rested.

A smile
Lit up my face
In gratitude
For this small
Gift of the Moon.

Exquisite

Great use of alliteration, the way it flowed was beautiful and unique, a real gem of a poem...♥

:-)

Many thanks.

Paul

The pleasure's all mine ♥

oh poetmaster...

just when I think you can't outdo your last write, you always seem to impress with another beauty of a write!.....I loved it....peace

such praise

Many, many thanks! As I write this, I'm reacquainting myself with your works...

nice

I really love the ending. raskin

Amazing

what a little imagination can do eh? Cheers

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