When The Storm Blows By: Will You Be There? Part 11

This is part of a series and must be read through the end to understand. It's long I know but only way to get full effect. Kind of old too but don't hold that against me.

The Plan

Two days from today,
Leave home as planned.
Meet in park,
Walk to Brooklyn's
Parents will be at work
(Mercedes' parents will be drunk
But is still too risky)
Make sure parents are gone.
When area is clear
Break into liquor cabinet,
Have a little fun.
Take dad's gun to Brooklyn's room
Then let the ceremony commence.

sad story

well written from the different characters views. There are a lot of tragedies in life, the loss of hope even in the side characters which would be the parents. Tough to read. Well done. raskin

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