Once Was

I once was loved
I felt it deep.
I once was known
Oh, it was sweet.
I once had passion
It filled my soul.
But then I felt it go
It happened but it was slow.
I slipped into my sweet depression
Felt myself overcome with dreadful emotion.
I felt like I was drowning
Even though I was breathing.
I felt like I was dying
Even though I was living.
I began bleeding
My soul sweetly draining.
And in the hours I was alone
Solidarity became a welcome home.
I savoured each dreadful emotion
Seeping in my sweet depression.
Filling my soul
Taking my passion.
Oh, it was sweet
To be known
I felt it deep
And I began to love it.

Believe me

I have been in and out of what you're describing...
This is real and wish you're just writing it and not really in one.
But whatever might be the case, I still wish you the best phantom! Good writing!
Eric

Thankfully,

Thankfully, right now I'm just writing about it although there is more than enough stress in my life. I've been there done that many times. Depression is just one of those things though. I tend to go in and out of it but right now just writing. I appreciate your feedback.

Phantomteens

This is who i am, who I was meant to be.

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Yea baby luckily your just writing i love this poem love and anythign you ever write like this will just be writing cos ik ill never hurt you mwah i love you baby
~Ryan .W. Frost~

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