Commuter world
The predators of the platform
Changing their positions
Ready to find a seat
To work and back again
People close together, thoughts miles away
30 minutes lost in dreams
The signs of the train talk to me
But I don´t understand them anymore
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Pete,
You took me there. The picture you create here is vivid. We are so connected and yet so disconnected.
The signs of our times are difficult to read. The train is running away. I love your art!
Warm regards,
Kathy Paysen
Train time
I take the train every day. It is my favorite 23 minutes of the morning. Especially now that I am using it to write and edit again.
I get the biggest kick out of the flatness of all the riders. So closed off from all the other riders. It really makes me want to know what is going on inside their heads. But that is just me.
I like your style. You get your point across with so few words.