Evenings Whisper

Trails beneath the sands display iron truths
You have an unparalleled velocity
Your orbit unpredictable as a comets tail
I unearthed a terrifying insight
The jigsaw puzzle of my romances
Give us an hour for magic
As the body is ravaged the spirit grows stronger
Watching the placenta of evening stars
I am troubled immeasurably by your eyes
The cooper palace of conception is burning
The infinite universe revealed
Pouring out from her palms.. a shore
Balancing like lithe demons
Planets wonder what it would be like to be you
Verbal fireflies damage me
Madness in a whisper
A message has started on its path
An arrow of hope
Burned and gutted
Hushed and fallen
A prayer to evenings last whisper
Let's reinvent the God's
All the myths of all the ages
On the verge of evolution
Framing my dark interiors
The pages break like ash

Wrote this while laying in a field behind a church watching a comet called Tittle Tattle under a blanket of shooting stars at about 4am. It was spectacular and inspiring.

that was beautiful

The skies can tell many stories and inspire us in many ways. Awesome poem.

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