Like long-leafed i stem.
Sticking to the winds i dissapate,
I must not be found,
No breath while you imatate.
Fog.. over the ground.
You can never cradle my existance,
Im forever expanding,
The only defence is resistance.
With juvenile reprimanding .
Im crashing in bushy restricted area,
Repairing scars and joining lessons.
Repairing trench ground and hysteria,
I'm trashing and disarming weapons.
Customers could never tamper...
I will not trip on rocky gravel,
Like long-leafed i stem,
Or disappear when i travel.
I will never sink nor swim.
Customer service with no answer...
One drip of my forever, will replace your eternity,
Learn to be the best or try,
Finesse in thinking takes taciturnity.
Learn to deal with life or die
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This is very visual with very powerful metaphors. i particularly like the last stanza, i felt very swept up in the mood of this poem.
kind regards
Cathy
Cathy oats thank youuuuu.
Cathy oats thank youuuuu. Thank you for your feedback. Now I can put this poem to rest.
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