Armada of Promises

And they say it don't they,
"I'll never leave you,
"Crush your needy heart into the grey
"As I skip away laughing with your best friend and love too."

"We'll be happy" she said,
"We'll have babies and everything we need."
So soon, she'd be happy if I were dead
She took satisfaction when I could no longer breed.

"Why don't you have angst like real artistes?"
She'd ask, as she eyed up a passing builder,
"Because, my love, I'd rather get peaced."
And she promised to be good as I killed her.

Not sure if this is real for

Not sure if this is real for you or from the imagination but either way,you have expressed the emotions well.
I like how it fell into place for me and seemed so realistic.
Well Done
Chenoa

Listen to all the teachers in the woods. Watch the trees, the animals and all the living things--you ll learn more from them than books ~Joe Coyhis

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