No Wisdom, Just Porn Spam
Serendipity strangely is not a sound
Bushels of bones infest this ground
Once was a red man in my foot prints
His tomb now a shopping mall in fortified districts
Succinct, Jean Valjean, like me, a bastard
Washed up on the shores of Croatia
I am a Coke bottle
With an email inside
Containing no wisdom
Just porn spam
Who wears the mask of Mark Twain?
Begging for a tomorrow?
Clicking heels?
Turning tornados into rainbows?
Scaring away the door to door salesman!
I didn't know they were merely Jehovah’s witnesses in drag...
My brain is popping corn in a distant microwave
Please hit the reset button
please
Bloody teeth drip from my gums
Plop-plop-drop–drop-
Duck Duck Goose
Spitting molars at my monitor
Waiting for the pop up
Laughing all the way
London Bridge surely won’t fall today
Anti-Intellect oozes like an ostrich
Across phallic fiber optic lines
We’re just speeding not reading
And unaware there was ever a fine
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Interesting in deed my
Interesting in deed my friend, there is a lot of suttle and not so suttle wisdom in this piece. I like the seemingly randomness of it all and how perfectly you brought it all back together..............Z
Thanks for reading and
Thanks for reading and commenting. I was trying, in my own bizarre way, to comment on the vacuous and random nature of modern society. Glad you picked up on that and enjoyed it. Peace, NSF
I hate to say
this brings back some wild memories for me. Rich wild thoughts. I really enjoy these stream of consciousness pieces you do. raskin
Thanks, Raskin. I figured
Thanks, Raskin. I figured you might enjoy this one. It's always nice to bring back memories for someone if you can with your poems. Unless it's repressed memories of being spanked with a paddle by a three hundred pound Samoan man in drag shouting curse words in Dutch. I don't like those memories.
Recently, I've been writing some really weird stream of consciousness stuff. We all go into our different periods of thoughts and writings and this is where I am now. Thanks for reading and sharing your reactions. Peace, NSF
very interesting...sounds
very interesting...sounds like something beck would write
Thanks for the compliment,
Thanks for the compliment, my friend. Beck is an awesome artist, and I love his work, especially his early stuff like "Deadweight." I've felt some of his inspiration in your work, too. Peace, NSF
in a flowing flowered skirt
You are very funny with these pieces but it could be my sense of humor is a bit off as well. Thanks for the laugh. raskin
Great Imagery
Great imagery my friend.
this is a wonderful piece of writing, it made a great read.
keep up the good work.
Warlock.
Thanks, Warlock, for the
Thanks, Warlock, for the kind words and for reading. Peace, NSF
ohhh waht a special peace
its a very special its my first time i read this kind of poem its great
Thanks for reading and
Thanks for reading and commenting, my friend. I'm glad that you enjoyed it. Peace, NSF
wow
had to read twice, because the first it all flew over my head but thats pretty amazing. those last two stanzas are my favourite, just awesome. how long did it take you to write this? it feels like you got the first bit and just rolled from there in one thought, is that what happened? its fantastic and i love it and good day
Thanks, Mountainman. This
Thanks, Mountainman. This one came together quick, only worked on it a couple hours. Sometimes I work for days, weeks, and months on poems. Some never never get finished, and some just flow quick. I'm sure you can relate to the oddity of creation. I'm glad you enjoyed my bizarre attempt at post-modernism with this. Peace, NSF