Love so strong
19 years old wondering if
she'll find love again
after what happened to her
with the lies and pain
Never did she think
four and half months ago
she would of had the best end of the year ever
out of everyone she knew,hers was absolutly the best one yet
She found someone
that makes her smile
that makes her happy
that means everything to her
with everything he says
And he has found someone
to make him happy
to make him smile
that means everything to him
with everything she says
Love so strong
is so hard to replace
between these two
who think that everything is wonderful
just her and him
life couldn't be better
falling for each other
no one else but her and him
Love so strong
Holding on long and forever
She always says,"he is a never ending dream,
that came so true",while lying in her bed before she sleeps
thinking of the day when he wraps his arms around her,saying,"i'll never leave"
Love so strong
Hearing from him,"that she brought him out of depression"
and that he has never been happier and luckier than any other guy
just her hearing those words makes her smile grow bigger
and her heart beat faster,its the sound of his voice that makes her fall in love
Love so strong
forever and always
nothing will take them apart
for him and her love is STRONG
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Very good
This was very cute and sweet and ideal. It makes me with I were in such a relationship....Very good job on this write.
I just have one question: where did the pain come in? The beginning starts with the girl wondering if she'd find love because of the lies and pain...and then it describes how 4 and a half months ago she wouldnt imagine finding the guy she did, and I thought it was a set up for her to break up with him (not that I wanted them to, it just sounded like it was coming). But then it describes this perfect love (that I am envious of =] ), and the heartbreak never came. Why was there hurt in the beginning?? The beginning is supposed to take place long after they met, isn't it? Could you explain this to me. I do not mean to be mean, I am just trying to understand.
I really did enjoy it, though =]. I'd just like to know what was going on with that =]
Love so sweet will never be bitter on the tongue of one who appreciates the taste.
wInTeR rOsE
thankyou
Before I met the one I am with now.I was in pain.I was in a relationship before the one I am in now,and he lied to me and played my heart.Thankyou so much for the comment.but yeah that's the reason.there is pain in the beginning.
~my_neverending_dream~
baby,you are a neverending dream that came true
iloveyou.
I agree with Winter Rose.
Very good indeed! I, too, didn't quite understand where you were going with the thought. But I do now. Very good poem all the same. Your comment clarified everything. And like Winter Rose, I am envious of you. Wishing I,too, were involved in such a passionate, loving relationship.
My heart goes out to you. May your love last forever and always be blessed!
thankyou tj
for the comment :) I hope it will too. :)
Love it is flower and you it's only seen[THE ROSE by Westlife]
-my_neverending_dream-
I know the song well...
One of my favorites. Whatever you do, my dear, don't let the romance or the poetry slip away from you. It's deep in your soul, and I hope it is in his too. My best wishes to both of you...