Issues in Communication

Issues In Communication

Tonight I had an inclination,
To put like words in combination,
To put them all now in relation,
This little thing of my creation.

So I've succumbed to fascination,
My pen proceeds to battle station,
My mind should act with inspiration,
To this semantic application.

On page it now has preservation,
Inside it gains appreciation,
When fears receive exoneration,
When thoughts in words provide elation.

This may put you into sedation,
You may not feel the same sensation,
But this is my infatuation,
With words in certain presentation.

They have no real implication,
And thus they hold no expectation,
But they lead one into contemplation,
A poem of sorts, an exploration.

Small verses with no elongation,
Can lead to quiet desperation,
But fear ye not the limitation,
Of this, my wordy incantation.

I write to relay information,
Without any consideration,
To a critic's choice of condemnation,
Of a poem that's built on no foundation.

Some say, "This is abomination",
"This work needs expert reparation".
But give it not your restoration.
For rhyme is poets’ respiration.

It merely is an explanation,
To ease poetic trepidation,
But lead you not into temptation,
To find some phoney imitation.

Enjoy this drawn out explanation,
A simple, curious observation,
And treat it not with indignation,
For lacking perfect punctuation.

This leaves me near the culmination,
A stream of thought, imagination,
Varied like some constellation,
United whilst in segregation.

And so ends this investigation,
While not without exasperation,
Has helped me in my navigation,
A rhyme the same for its duration.

I lLike This

I really like this piece Musel, it has great energy to it, and alot of wit aswell.

DEbs

merci

thanks a lot debs, it's the first poem i have ever written so I'm quite fond of it

Quite an accomplishment

Musel,

I can tell you from my years of experience that this type of piece is not the least bit easy to write and have make any kind of sense. You have done a wonderful job and I tip my cap to you.

Pete

well thanks Pete, that

well thanks Pete, that really means a lot to me. I have only this week posted my writing online so it is encouraging to get such nice feedback.

Musel

If you keep em coming I'll keep on reading and giving you my take. You will find that I am honest in my assessments and that is all one can ask on a site such as this.

Pete

Question

Am i allowed to upload all my work to my blog in one day or how does it work?? I don't want to annoy the moderators on my first day!!

Musel

You have read my piece "Self-Inflicted Trip to the Woodshed" and that is a result of my overzealousness to post. I had close to 300 hundred pieces posted on here and it truly overwhelmed the site. My recommendation would be to space it out, perhaps two postings a day. That way you will give the readers a chance to see your work and comment on it. When you post too many, as I did, they tend to get lost in the shuffle and sit there garnering no attention at all.

Free advice from one who knows.

Pete

thanks

I will take those comments on board Pete, I have 2 up there now so I will leave them to the curious eyes of the other members and start reading some more of other people's work! this is a 2 wway street after all and I need to keep reminding myself of that..

A great introduction

Pete has taken the words out of my mouth (albiet with eloquence). I really like this poem and look forward to reading more.

Dolan

thank you Dolan, I will

thank you Dolan, I will endeavour to pass comment on your work as well. thanks also for the welcome

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