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And I Write

Posted April 20th, 2009 by moonshield

And I write these feelings down,
to force my visions upon you,
to make you see me scary dreams.
So I know that my thoughts are shared with someone.
So I can make you know me.
So I can nourish this illusion that someone out there cares.
So I wont feel so alone.

©moonshield, 20.04.2009

Writing

On April 20th, 2009 neocon_shakes_fear says:

Can alleviate these feelings and allow one to express his/herself. It's probably helped most people here through many a dark moment. I appreciate this poem a lot.

I Agree

On April 20th, 2009 David Gibbs says:

With NSF, writing is good form of release to many, write on moonshield,
Dave

Thanks

On April 20th, 2009 moonshield says:

I didn't really expect any comments, much less positive ones. Probably the highlight of my day!

And I Write

On April 21st, 2009 Scareysquirel says:

I really like the way this was written, as if beginning half way through a thought process......'And I write these feeling down'
Powerful words, just flowing from the subconcious.

Debs ~

Thankyou

On April 21st, 2009 moonshield says:

Thanks for the nice compliment. Thats how it came about actually, in the midst of a pensive morning.

I think all creative hearts

On April 21st, 2009 Jean Chamblee says:

I think all creative hearts feel that way sometimes! We are a unique bunch! Good capture of your feelings.

Thanks

On April 21st, 2009 moonshield says:

Thanks, though sometimes it feels like a feel that way all the time.

Very interesting

On April 27th, 2009 Tadami Yamada says:

Very interesting. It has been caused by wht you repeated the word 'so' four times. I felt as if I urged with something.
Tadami Yamada

Thanks

On April 27th, 2009 moonshield says:

Thanks very much for the comment
Moonshield

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