Unreal
Where do I start to tell you?
how much you’ve changed my life
how much with you I feel alive
how much you make my heart sing
how much to you I want to cling
Where do I start?
How do I tell you?
how you make me feel
how it seems so unreal
how I long to be with you
how to you I want to be true
How do I tell you?
Where do I get the words?
to explain how much I’m feeling
to tell how of you I’m ever dreaming
to somehow explain the day we met
to make sense of how we connect
Where do I get the words?
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Nice..
It's so great that you feel the love enough to try and get the message across. I think poets are destined to always try and put the indescribable into words.. It is wonderful to know love this strong. :-)
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love is beautiful! im glad
love is beautiful! im glad you appreciate the feeling behind the poem.
love is beautiful! im glad
love is beautiful! im glad you appreciate the feeling behind the poem.
Sweet!!
i really enjoyed reading this, such a sweet poem, lovely emotion.
it has a great rhymng scheme and i love the way it flows, and the style you wrote it in as it comes across as the retorical questons show the confusion of the feeling