A Poem for Nanny

You couldn't move,
You couldn't speak.
You couldn't smile,
Your breath was weak.

And there you lay
On the hospital bed
As we sat vigil
And counted the stars.

"See Orion?"
He hunts for food,
And at his side are his faithful friends.
Forever and ever,
For eternity,
They run, run 'round,
Strong and healthy.

You couldn't answer,
You couldn't say
That things wouldn't always be this way.
That you used to be mighty,
And you used to be bold,
But you'd soon be in heaven,
Not sickly nor old.

And there you lay
In the small hospice room
As we sat vigil,
And we prayed for you.

"See Pegasus?"
His soul soars above
On white, ethereal wings,
Always watching over.
Bathed in the starlight,
He never dies;
Steadfast sanctuary
Up in the sky.

You couldn't touch me
Or hug me and say
That you'd never die either;
In my heart you would stay.
You couldn't tell daddy
Or mommy that there
Was no need to cry
And that you weren't scared.

"See Aquarius?"
He gives water of life
To the regions of heaven,
And to the tears we cry.
Though we may fall melancholy,
And though we may weep
We learn to live once more
As time slowly creeps...

But you could stay no longer,
Your time here was up.
And with one sharp, short gasp
You were on your way.
With your empty vessel,
We laid down and wept
But that night I could see you
In my dreams where I slept.

The stars watching over,
Heaven and Paradise.
You are among them
Without heartache nor vice.
You've no need for sorrow
Nor any distress,
And one day I'll join you
After I go to rest.

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beautiful tribute to your grandmother, the way you wove the stars into your words shows a true understanding of not thinking of death as the end, but almost as a new beginning. thanks for sharing, and welcome to the showcase :D ♥

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Thanks, Jewel~! :D This place looks fun. I never knew there was such a nice place to share poetry online~! ♥

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I tried other online poetry sites before, when I was looking for an unbiast opinion of my writes, but had trouble with people pinching poems-then I found this one, the showcase, and it's brilliant. I've been a member for almost a year now (scary:P) and haven't had any problems on here at all, not to mention made some great friends-it rocks! xD ♥

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