waterfall

Curtains of White torrents cascading from the skies
Youthful in your vigour you pour yourself from high...
your overwhelming presence speaks in a resounding voice
as you splinter on the black rocks down below and nigh
drowning one's senses in your torrential noise...
And then as though harnessed by some unseen force
you become a gentle stream as you change your course
oh white ribbons of freshness ! defying human hold
living streams of water,doing what you are told
peeping thru the silent trees ,
you are a beauty to behold

Lovely Write

You captured it perfectly! Very enjoyable read,
Dave

Thank you David for your

Thank you David for your read and comment.i appreciate it

Mi^ _ ^Mi !!!

Long time no see.. howdy my friend?- means how does it be?! wonderful piece about waterfalls, the beauty they splay.. oh how it enthralls! BRYCE

Thank you bryce...been good

Thank you bryce...been good ,just took a few days off and dashed to the countyside ...thank you for your read and comment....glad you enjoyed the poem

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